Friday, March 4, 2011

Persuasive essay notes



·      Logos
o   Appeal of logic
§  Is your argument logical
o   The logic used to support a claim
§  Induction and deduction
o   Can also be the facts and statistical used to help support the argument
·      Ethos
o   Appeal of self
§  Does your audience like you due to how you act, speak or write
o   The source’s credibility
o   The speaker/author’s authority
·      Pathos
o   Emotional appeal
§  Why should your audience care
§  What is in it for them
o   The emotional or motivational appeals
§  Vivid language
§  Emotional language
§  Numerous sensory detail
·      Self Interest
o   Things that make a good persuasive argument
o   Self connection
o   Self interest
§  What is your connection to your subject or argument
§  If you are not passionate or invested, your audience won’t be
o   The writer’s credentials to hold an opinion on the subject is vital. Why did you choose this topic? Your passion should come out. If an audience feels that the writer is competent, qualified or passionate about an issue they are more likely to believe the writer’s position.
o   Self Interest = Ethos
§  The writer should state why they have a right to talk about a subject. Often this comes out through a short narration or personal story. The story can act as an example and proof of the writer’s knowledge and expertise in the subject
·      Expert Testimony
o   Interviews, quotes, documentation with experts that back up your opinion
o   Make sure you state how the quote backs up your ideas
o   If the writer is not an expert on the subject, or even is she/he is an expert, evidence in the field is valuable to the credibility of the writer’s arguments
o   Think Logos and Ethos
·      What is an expert
o   Someone:
§  With a PhD
§  Who has published a book on the subject
§  Who works for in a special or specific field
§  Recognized by others
·      Quality of reasoning
o   Can you offer facts, statistics or supporting details
o   This is research driven
o   If an argument is sound and is backed up by facts, figures and supporting details, it is more likely to be accepted
o   Research is often required for facts and statistics
o   Logos
·      Facts:
o   Things that can’t be refuted
·      Statistics:
o   Surveys, collected data
·      Flaws in opposing arguments
o   Point out the flaws of your opposition
o   If you can present the reader with the opposing side’s view and discuss the faults or flaws I their view, you are more apt to persuade a reader
§  Do it in a nice, ethical way
§  DON’T call them stupid
o   It’s just as important to acknowledge and secede an argument that you can’t refute. It shows your audience that you’ve thought about the other side
·      Opposing arguments
o   Know both sides
o   If you can relate to your opponents argument while backing up your own, people will believe you more
o   In order to understand a topic, you must understand both sides
o   Think logos and ethos here
·      What about your audience?
o   PATHOS
o   Appeal to audience’s self-interest
§  What’s in it for me?
o   The audience is more likely to believe an argument if there is something in it for them
o   People want to know WHY they should support your opinion
§  If we do this than… (Benefits)
§  If we don’t do this than… (Harms)
o   Benefits
§  The rewards, the good things that happen if the audience adopts your arguments or plan
o   Harms
§  The bad things that will happen is the audience doesn’t accept your argument position or plan.
·      Make it New!
o   Choose a topic that is:
o   Original
o   New
o   Radically different
o   A new twist on an old topic
o   Think ETHOS and PATHOS
·      DON’T!!!
o   THINGS TO AVOID
§  Irrational evidence
§  Generalities
§  Arguments that make little sense
§  Data that doesn’t back up your position
§  Mud Slinging
·      Do not persuade your audience by attacking your opponent’s character this is considered unethical. It discredits you to intelligent audiences
§  Emotional persuasion
§  An appeal to feelings, passions and prejudices rather than logic
§  Most commercials appeal to emotions
§  Propaganda
·      The weighted words to arouse feelings against a person, an idea, a political party, a class, a nation
§ Hitler used emotional persuasion
§  Transfer of emotions or ideas from sources that have little, if anything, to do with your topic
§  Use of quotation from men or women who are not experts in the field of your argument
§  Do not quote famous people just because they are famous
§  Oversimplification
     EX- abortion is wrong because life is life.
·      DO!!!
o   Have self Interest
o   have expert testimony
o   Use data, statistics, and logic
o   Refute your opponent’s arguments
o   Think about audience self interest
o   Make it new!
·      Hook
o   First thing the reader reads and supposed to draw the readers attention
§  Jokes
§  Questions
§  Hypothetical situations
§  Stories
§  Anything interesting
o   What makes a good hook is something that ties to the thesis statement
·      Thesis Statement
o   A statement
o   NOT question
o   Needs to be obvious
o   Usually one sentence
·      Order of development
o   Main points
·      Thesis Statement
o   A declarative sentence
§  The more specific the better
·      Order of Development
o   1st paragraph
§  hook
§  thesis
§  order
o   2nd paragraph
§  defines the problem
o   3rd paragraph
§  Shows why the problems needs to be addressed
o   4th paragraphs
§  Offers solutions
o   Conclusion
§  Wraps everything up


Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Lady Macduff's background

Lady Macbeth may feel neglected. Macduff is in the beginning of the play quite a bit, which means he isn't at home with Lady Macduff and her son. She may feel that if Macduff is going to leave again, he can just stay away and never come back. She feels that he has abandoned his family for the last time! She wants to know how her son would feel about having a step-father.

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Macbeth Review Guide

  • Five Elements of Tragedy
    • tragic hero
    • dramatic foils
    • internal and external conflicts
    • rises questions of existence 
    • hero must be fated to fall
  • Five Elements of Tragic Hero
    • Noble Birth
    • virtuous and loyal
    • tragic flaw causes downfall
    • tragic flaw
    • audience must learn from the hero's mistake
  • Macbeth's Tragic Flaw
    • Blind Ambition
  • Soliloquy
    • An actor standing alone on stage reciting a speech
      • Act 3, Scene 1, Banquo is talking about how he thinks Macbeth has cheated to gain his titles and hopefully what the weird sisters said about him will come true like it did for Macbeth.
  • Monologue
    • An actor reciting a speech to people on stage
      • Malcolm's speech at the very end of the play. He tells the soldiers that he is naming all of the thanes, earls. 
  • Plot
    • Exposition
      • The battle 
      • the witches
    • Inciting
      • The witches tell Macbeth and Banquo Macbeth will be king but so will Banquo's children
    • Rising Action
      • Macbeth killing Duncan
      • Macbeth becomes King
      • Macbeth has Banquo and Fleance killed
        • Fleance escapes
    • Climax
      • Witches apparitions predictions
    • Falling Action
      • Macduff goes to England and compiles an army
      • Macbeth had Macduff's family killed
      • Birnam woods 'marches' to Dunsinane. 
      • Macduff kills Macbeth
    • Resolution
      • Macbeth dies
      • Malcolm becoming king
  • Themes
    • Blind Ambition
      • Macbeth decides to kill all of Macduff's family just because he can. 
    • The Corruption of Power
      • After Macbeth was crowned king, he decides to kill off everyone that was a threat to him. He hires people to kill Banquo, Fleance and Macduff's whole family. 
    • Appearance VS. Reality
      • In Act 1, Scene 6,Lady Macbeth tells Macbeth to 'look like the innocent flower, but be the serpent underneath'. She tells him to appear kind and be a good host, but really he is plotting Duncan's death.
    • Superstition and how it affects human behavior
      • Macbeth thinks he is invincible because the witches' apparitions tell him seemingly impossible things. 
    • Good VS. Evil
      • In Act 2, Scene 3, the Porter says, "Who's there in the name of Beelzebub?" he metaphorically turns the castle to hell. and he is now the doorman to the gates of hell. 
  • Characters
    • Macbeth
      • Turned king of Scotland
      • tyrant
      • dynamic
      • lady Macbeth told him to kill Duncan
        • Lady Macbeth was power hungry
      • died because macduff kills him
    • Lady Macbeth
      • queen of castle
      • married to Macbeth
      • tells Macbeth to murder Duncan because she is power hungry
      • before she dies she is constantly washing her hands 
      • considered fourth witch because she lets demons into the house
    • Duncan
      • old king of Scotland
      • murdered by Macbeth
      • considered an angel or awesome king compared to any other king

    • Malcolm
      • young
      • becomes king of Scotland after Macbeth's death
      • thought to have murdered his father (Duncan)

    • Donalbain
      • youngest son
      • also thought to have murdered Duncan

    • Banquo
      • caption of Scotland
      • strong
      • witches tell him that his sons will be king
    • Macduff
      • thane of fife
      • after the murder of Duncan, banquo, and macduff's family he helps lead an army against Macbeth
    • Lady Macduff
      • macduff's wife
      • innocent bystander
      • murdered by Macbeth to show macduff who's boss
    • Lennox
      • last thane to be loyal to Macbeth
      • eventually goes to the good side

    • Ross
      • cousin of macduff
      • told macduff the fate of his family
      • also present when macduff says that maybe Duncan's sons killed Duncan
        • because they fled

    • Seyton
      • officer for Macbeth
      • tells Macbeth that lady Macbeth committed suicide
    • Menteith
      • commander of the Scottish army that joined Macduff's army
      • thane
    • The Porter
      • drunken doorman at Macbeth's castle
      • answers door to macduff and Lennox goes on about the things the drinking can 
    • The Witches
      • three witches represent the past, present and future
      • three familiar
        • toad
        • cat
        • harpier
    • The Doctor
      • diagnoses lady Macbeth with a disease of the mind
      • flees the castle before the battle begins
    • The Bloody Captain
      • tells Duncan that Macbeth has won the battle
      • compares Macbeth and banquo to eagle
    • Fleance
      • Banquo's son
    • Siward
      • general of the English forces 
      • Macbeth kills his son
      • friend of Macduff and Malcolm
  • Motifs
    • Washing of Hands
      • represents guilt
        • lady Macbeth's guilt
          • supposedly, Duncan's blood is on her hands and she tries to wash it off but its 'stained' on her soul forever!
    • Blood
      • there is a lot of physical and metaphorical blood.
      • another representation of the guilt of lady Macbeth and Macbeth
    • Daggers
      • they killed Duncan with daggers
      • the apparitions of daggers are another representation of guilt
    • Planting of seeds/ things growing
      • the witches touched Macbeth's head and it starts Macbeth's new journey onto king hood and into eventually to becoming a tyrant
      • eagle to the owl  
        • Macbeth being good turning into a bad guy
      • when a plant dies it is easily replaced by other plants
      • when lady Macbeth dies that sends Macbeth into his rant about life being meaningless. he has
      • Malcolm talks about planting new seeds
        • they have harvested all the evil out of Scotland
      • Duncan talks about making Macbeth grow
    • Atmosphere of castle
      • atmosphere follows Macbeth's character
      • at first, Macbeth was happy, and the castle was happy
      • then the Macbeth's get the idea to kill Duncan. 
      • then at the end, all hell has broke loose, literally. 
    • Spells, chants  and supernatural beings
      • all of the supernatural beings are weird and set a haunting and creepy mood. at first they are just mentioned but then these things plague Macbeth's mind and help cause his downfall
    • Weather
      • the fog and depressing atmosphere sets the mood for the battle. 
      • before Macbeth turns evil, the weather surrounding the castle is happy
      • after he is evil, the weather is dark and gloomy 
      • the final battle is also depressing and dark
    • Spirits, scorpions, snakes and things in the mind
      • The animals that are mentioned plague his mind and cause him to go crazy. 
      • they are deadly animals, not ones you would want in your head, they represent all the people that Macbeth has killed out of blind ambition
    • Birds and flying
      • Eagles
        • Noble, swift and valiant birds
        • Macbeth is compared to because he won the battle against Macdonald
      • Sparrows
        • Banquo is compared to a sparrow
          • Banquo helped Macbeth win the battle so he is also compared to a majestic bird 
      • Owl
        • Death and bad omen
        • Macbeth becomes the owl because he starts killing people and becomes the symbol for death in Scotland
      • Marlet
        • Tiny, peaceful bird that approves of Macbeth's castle in the beginning when it is happy. When the castle turns to hell, the bird leaves. 
      • Falcon
        • Duncan is compared to the falcon
        • Like the eagle, the falcon is also a majestic, valiant bird
        • The owl kills the falcon
          • Macbeth killing duncan
      • Crows
        • bad
        • murderers 
        • they represent the owls minions
        • Agents of the night
      • Geese
        • English soldier
        • they oppose the owl
      • Wren
        • Lady Macduff
        • small
        • a bird that wants to take her young ones and join the geese and fight against the owl






Thursday, February 10, 2011

Act 5 Study Questions

  1. SCENE 1
    1. They see Lady Macbeth sleep walking. She is walking around trying to wash the guilt off her hands, but the still 'smell of blood'. The Nurse has seen Lady Macbeth write out a note, read it  seal it away, and then return to bed. 
    2. Lady Macbeth's hands are "stained" with blood. No matter how many times she 'washes' her hands, they won't get clean. She wants to forget that they killed Duncan, but she can't. 
    3. She is guilty. She is so guilty that is is making her crazy. When she is sleeping she has no control over her actions. This guilt manifests its self by making her sleep walk and symbolically wash her hands. 
  2. SCENE 2
    1. The Scottish army is meeting to talk about when they are going to meet up with Malcolm and his army, so they can take down Macbeth. The two new characters that are introduced are Menteith and Caithness and they are both Thanes of Scotland. Because they are Thanes of Scotland, this shows that there are very few people left on Macbeth's side. 
    2. It shows that there are Scottish people rebelling against Macbeth. 
    3. Some think Macbeth is crazy, others that aren't that fond of Macbeth, think he is just valiantly angry. 
  3. SCENE 3
    1. He is mad. The thanes of Scotland deserted him, the doctor can't fix his wife, his servant keeps bringing him bad news about the approaching army, and he won't live the life of a peaceful old man. It kinda sucks to be Macbeth right now. 
    2. Macbeth isn't afraid because he thinks he is invincible! Birnam Woods will never move closer to Dunsinane Hill. It's not possible for a man not to be woman-born. The soldiers are scared because even though Macbeth may be invincible, they aren't. They are also greatly outnumbered. 
  4. SCENE 4
    1. The soldiers are to cut down branches from Birnam Woods to hide themselves as they marched on to Dunsinane Hill. 
  5. SCENE 5
    1. She should have died later on. Perhaps after the war when he has time to mourn her death. 
    2. Life is only a play. They are all just actors strutting about the stage. Macbeth says life is meaningless, he has basically given up. 
  6. SCENE 6
    1. The army finally reaches the castle, the third apparition spoke the truth. Malcolm, Siward and Macduff give their army a pep talk and they throw down their trees and storm the castle!
  7. SCENE 7
    1. Macebth kills Young Siward, Siward's son. Young Siward is English and because Macbeth killed him, he was born of a woman. It shows that even the English have to suffer to take down macbeth. 
  8. SCENE 8
    1. Macbeth encounters Macduff. They fight. Macbeth  
    2. Macbeth would rather die then surrender. 
    3. Malcolm is named the new king of Scotland

Monday, January 31, 2011

Act 4 Study Questions

  1. SCENE 1
    1. An armed head tells him to beware of Macduff. A bloody child tells him no man born of a woman (Caesarean section) shall harm Macbeth. A crowned child holding a tree says Macbeth shall rule until Birham woods comes against Dunsiane Hill (where Macbeth's castle is). The fourth vision is eight kings, the last has a cup in his hand, and they are followed Banquo's ghost. This vision tells Macbeth that Banquo's sons shall become king.
    2. Visions 2- A bloody child tells him no man born of a woman (Caesarean section) shall harm Macbeth. He thinks that he is invincible because he misunderstands. 
    3. Macduff has fled to England.
    4. Macbeth has decided to go to Macduff castle and kill everyone inside.
    5. Macbeth thinks he is invincible. He is going to do something stupid that is going to get himself killed. 
  2. SCENE 2
    1. Shakespeare put in this scene to show that Macduff basically up and left. He left his family defenseless. Lady Macduff can't understand why he would do this. But because Macduff left she thinks he is a traitor and he is pretty much dead to her. She doesn't really care is Macduff comes back or not. Her son, wonders why Lady Macduff says his father is dead. After the messenger tells Lady Macduff that he fears something evil is coming and she should leave, Lady Macduff doesn't understand why something evil is coming because she has done nothing wrong.
    2. It gives Macduff one more reason to kill Macbeth. Macbeth is also still having the murderer do his dirty work. 
    3. 'He wants the natural touch. For the poor wren, The most diminutive of birds, will fight, Her young ones in her nest, against the owl.' Lady Macduff compares herself to a wren, a small bird, who is left alone to fight the 'owl' (Macbeth).
  3. SCENE 3
    1. He has come to enlist the help of the King of England, (and Malcolm). Macduff wants to take down Macbeth. 
    2. He says that Macbeth has hurt many people, and Macduff is not one of them. Malcolm is afraid that Macduff might take him to Macbeth as a sacrifice.
    3. The lamb represents Malcolm. Malcolm thinks Macduff might be in England to bring Malcolm back to Macbeth as a sacrifice.
    4. There are still some bright shining angels, even thought the brightest has fallen (Lucifer). This might mean that Malcolm is comparing Macbeth to Lucifer. Macbeth used to be one of Duncan's most loyal and best men. Like Lucifer, Macbeth rebelled by killing Duncan. Now Macduff and Malcolm and going to act as God and 'caste Macbeth out of heaven' by killing him.
    5. The country is going to pay because Macbeth is a bad king, and a lot of people are going to die.
    6. 'I grant him bloody, l
      uxurious, avaricious, false, deceitful, s
      udden, malicious, smacking of every sin t
      hat has a name'. 
      I admit that he’s murderous, lecherous, greedy, lying, deceitful, violent, malicious, and guilty of every sin that has a name.
    7. Malcolm has gotten brave. Before, when the everything around him got tough, he fled to England. Now, he Macduff has convinced him to help him kill King Macbeth.
    8. There is now some hope for Scotland, because Macduff and Malcolm plan to take down Macbeth and they have 10,000 Englishmen backing them up. 
    9. Malcolm asks the doctor if the king is coming out. The doctor tells him that there is a line of people out the door waiting to be healed. Modern medicine can't help them but when the king touches them they are miraculously healed. It is symbolic because only a true king is able to touch and heal his subjects. This alludes to god curing the sick and injured. 
    10. Old Siward's 10,000 warlike men.
    11. Macduff has just learned that his wife and children have been murdered. Malcolm tells him turn his grief into revenge and fight the pain like a man. Macduff tells him that he will but he must also feel grief. He can't help but think about the things that were most precious to him. 

Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Act 3 Questions

  1. You have it all now, you're the King, Thane of Cawdor and Glamis, just as the weird women promised. But I suspect you cheated to win these titles. Although they also said that my descendants would be king, not yours. If what the withes say is true- what they said about you came true- then perhaps what they said about me will also come true. But shh! I will speak no more.
    1. Banquo is thinking over everything that has happened. He thinks that Macbeth may have cheated to gain his new titles. he hopes that if the witches speak the truth, then what they said about him will come true.
  2. He is afraid that Banquo knows that he killed Duncan. He is also worried that Banquo's sons will become king because he has no offspring to become king. Macbeth would rather have his own children become king. 
  3. Macbeth killed Duncan for Banquo's sons. He ruined his own peace so they could become king one day.
  4. Macbeth tells them that Banquo made their life hell, not him. He asks them if they are just going to let Banquo get away with it.
  5. SCENE 2
    1. He feels he is safe for the moment. He has killed the king and the crown will sit safely on his head, for awhile. He thinks that he will be in the same kind of danger as the previous king. He worries that the murderers won't complete their mission. (Which they don't, but you don't know that until scene three.)
    2. Lady Macbeth asks Macbeth what he is going to about Banquo and Fleance. He tells her that it's better that she doesn't know the details until after the deed is done. Then she can just applaud him for it. 
    3. He is talking to the night asking it to fall so Banquo can be murdered without anyone knowing.  Macbeth wants the bond (Banquo's life) to be broken. 
    4. Usually in night, evil things happen or evil things come out. Night and sleep aren't safe anymore because Macbeth has chosen these times to kill the people he feels threatened by. Macbeth can't sleep, but the dead (Duncan) can. Crows are said to be black agents, which symbolizes the murderers. 
  6. SCENE 3
    1. This is the scene were the first two murderers are joined by a third that was sent by Macbeth to help them. The murderers attack Banquo and kill him. To their dismay, Fleance has fled and they have failed half of their mission.
  7. SCENE 4
    1. Macbeth sees the ghost of Banquo during his celebratory feast. He goes ballistic and makes a complete fool of himself in front of a lot of important people.
    2. Banquo is the grown serpent and Fleance is the young snake. Banquo is lying dead in a ditch while Fleance has ran off. Macbeth really isn't afraid of Fleance because as of right know, he poses no threat. Macbeth will worry about him in a later date. 
    3. It reinforces the presence of supernatural things motif. It's also representation of Macbeth's guilt, which is making him crazy. 
    4. Blood symbolizes guilt.
    5. She tries to calm down the guests and tell them that Macbeth in sick. Macbeth embarrasses Lady Macbeth so much that she starts apologizing to the guests. 
  8. SCENE 5
    1. She is mad at the witches because they didn't include her in their plot to trick Macbeth into stopping at nothing to become king. Hecate chews them out an tells them to notify her the next time they meet with Macbeth. 
    2. I don't think t hat Shakespeare wrote this scene. It doesn't follow the 10 syllable pattern that the rest of Shakespeare's work does. Hecate's speak is very rhymy and sing-songy. Hecate also shows up out of no where. She has no relevance to the movement of the plot. She is just there and won't appear through out the rest of the book. 
  9. SCENE 6
    1. Lennox compares Fleance to Donalbain and Malcolm. It has been said that Malcolm and Donalbain may have killed their father because they fled. Macduff, has gone to England to make an allegiance with the king and raise an army. Together, they are going to bring down the unworthy King Macbeth.
    2. This scene sets up a great battle in the end of the book between Macbeth ad Macduff's army. 
    3. Macduff and his army will hopefully end Macbeth's reign. Since Macbeth killed sleep, bringing him down will hopefully let Scotland sleep peacefully.